The Spiritual Form Of This Human Being

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by Sweet Barbie (Account disabled) on Saturday, 25-Oct-2008 12:35:25

The spiritual nature form
of her skin so silky soft
She fits the sculpture paining that is a rose
Slender as her whole body resembling the stem
and her fragrance of her very sweet and almost way too pleasureable soul
is the actual flower
Her feelings of deep strength for others and their feelings alike
she actually blooms for all to either see or not to see
For those who look closely at this soft radiant figure of pleasant beautiful creation of a splendid masterpiece
that has only been thought of by her
They enjoy this creation that has befitted an angel
only written about in books and mystery

Post 2 by dissonance (Help me, I'm stuck to my chair!) on Saturday, 25-Oct-2008 18:41:28

I'm a huge fan of the images...the rose metaphor...and the line about being there even if people dont' see it. :) nice...inspiring i need to work on my image implimentation.